If you can rewrite "1984 - George Orwell", what would you change?

I would replace everything with modern examples and raise the issue on how everyone is too sensitive nowadays and end it on a hopeful note where the overly sensitive get a rude awakening and due to their weakness and incapability to deal with real issues; they get wiped out by real life problems that they just complicate further because the overly sensitive are in positions of power too. The hopeful note ends with them being wiped out.

I don't understand your question. It's rather vague. Is that supposed to be a title of an article?